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2.In your opinion, is there anything missing from the policy? Please explain.
1. A commitment to safety. Safety concerns are the primary reason that parents don't let their kids walk or bike to school. 2. Regular reviews of performance - are fewer people driving this year than last year? Why or why not? 3. Transportation in the curriculum. APS Students should learn how to safely walk, bike, ride the school bus, and ride public transit over the course of their years in school.
3.Are there any parts of the policy that are unclear? Please explain.
Roles and responsibilities in making progress on transportation demand management. What are the School Board's responsibilities? The Superintendent's Resonsibilites? The Transportation Department's responsibilities? Individual school principal's responsibilities? Currently it seems to be nobody's responsibility and therefore nobody's priority.
5.Are there other comments that you would like to provide?
This Policy and the Student Transportation policy should be updated concurrently when doing future updates. There is so much more that APS should be doing to support mode shift, and current efforts are very inconsistent between schools.